Thursday, January 15, 2009

cries unheard

[ solitary walk, Pukinui Farm, Taupaki - pic taken by me ]

The tears cascade
I am as usual, alone
Strength a mere façade
On and on the lonely hours drone
Wishing, just wishing
Dreaming, always dreaming...

My life
A new world
Of luck. Of chance. Without strife?
Inked pages, with age, curled...

Myself
So very different
Yet so very much the same...

These slipping droplets
A silent scream
For my saviour, alarm pellets
My answer, my prayer – a mere dream
So I cry, hopelessly, I cry
Wishing these windows to my soul would remain, forever dry...

~ a riddle of sorts, I guess...an original again ~

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

BEAUTIFUL... though its depressive.. keep comming more.. how about somethin more happy? the days when u were happy? cheers and tc

~Necro

blu3rain said...

Thanks, Necro... but you know, my writing expresses my feelings...and no matter how hard I could try to squeeze something happy out of me when I'm sad, or vice versa, it won't happen...

Tc too ^^

ish said...

have i told you how much i love your poetry?
cuz if i didn't, i love your poetry. there like, a gateway of some sorts.

blu3rain said...

I think you might have mentioned that... hehe... thank you, again though ^^ gateway huh??

Hope you're doing good! Tc XD

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