[ 'searching' - pic taken by me, Waitakere Ranges, NZ ]
Searching for words
For that which
There are none...
Feeling so old
In this life
That I’ve but just started living...
With age
A mere fledgling
Yet with burden and duty
Less so...
Searching for words
To describe
Such that cannot be described...
Searching for words...
Searching...
Searching...
~ original, obviously... that kinda came pretty fast...lol...anyways hope you enjoy or whatever =P ~
10 comments:
Nice.
Umm...thanks ^^
well thats a nice one
very nice.. :)
Thanks, ruks and shootingstar! ^^
Attention-seeking whore. Die. Many people need attention far more than you do. You're young and attractive. Imagine the people who can't even write a few pathetic non-poetry lines, who are old and sad and wrinkled. Your whiny lies hurt them.
anonymous : attention-seeking whore yourself, person who comes and spams other peoples' blogs with negative comments. also, you seem to lack the courage to even reveal your identity.
about your comment's content, it's her blog. her little slice of the internet. she can put whatever she wants here. also, no one forced you to come here. like wise, no one forced you to comment. and finally, if you didn't like it, why not just close the damn page with one click instead of posting your whole life story here? nobody cares. nobody is interested, ok?
next, is it her fault if not everyone has the god-given gift of poetry? is it such a bad thing to be old and wrinkly? we all will have to be that sometime or the other. it's the natural order of things. as you read this comment [if you read this comment] you are growing older and older and older and there is not a damn thing you can do about it. deal with it!
it offends no one. except maybe you. and since you didn't have the gall to reveal your true name, she would neither apologize [whether it be due or not] nor would she alter her words in any way. cowards whine like bitches about things that aren't problems at all. go whine somewhere else. :)
and poot? don't listen to cowards/bitches like that. it's good as always. :)
hey this is shumaa
n yeah u first anonymous get a life you moron...what the fuck is your problem??its her blog she can write whatever she wantss...look who is an attention seeking whore???n where did u get that anyway???did u just jump from a medeival fight?i mean thay r the only people who say things like that n say "die"...bluh....u soo bluh man..,die yourself hypocrite
*laughing out loud*
First, thanks you guys! Arky n Shuma!! *hearts to you*
And anonymous, I just wonder who you are...but thanks for the laugh =P
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